Angel of Death

Hey Ash, I loved this chapter! Everything is just getting better and better! Your descriptions and the way Sophia is portrayed is just magnificent. The flashback was my favorite part ...

*Gold Star* I am like so in love with you right now. This was so great that I can't even.... You executed every scene, every emotion perfectly and my... This ...

Hello again Ash, Well I am enjoying this story but I must admit it does seem a little like Twilight, school-day wise. If you give it a little bit of ...

Whoa!! Hey Ash, Well, I must say, before I start, that I wish that I could have your luck. I mean I have Writer's Block constantly and when I do ...

I'm having so much trouble sticking with the two current novels that I'm writing. So just to see how it feels to have help, I'm starting a new project but ...

Yay!! Hey Jig!! This was an exceptional last piece and I loved it. You captured everything about the stream of conciousness thing and you kept going with one feeling. Darkness; ...

And all that Jazz By Angel of Death Scene 1 The day is nothing but a dark room with one light shining down on the Earth. Gray clouds fill the ...

Hey Jig!! Before I go on, I must say that no matter how great your writing is, I will not stop being mad at you until you give me an ...

I was so bored the other day so I sat down and started creating my own website. Its not as great as YWS and I don't think it will ever ...

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Whoa this was a well written post. Well anyways, I'd be happy to help. Victorian-flavored sounds rather interesting. Oh and welcome to YWS -Angel

Hey Ky, thanks for letting me know you posted this! Well anyways, I can't see anything wrong. Your writing keeps getting better in each chapter. Here you cut down on ...

I am here as promised. The events of that day and the way a felt when it happened. After way there should be an 'I' After, I told myself nothing ...

Yay a review! Thanks for commenting and this doesn't necessarily have to do with the Middle East its just at the moment, we're they're located. I have a pretty good ...

Its been a while but I'm back^-^ Well anyways, this was absolutely lovely. The descriptions made me feel like I was there with Yamini as Amish and Lokesh stole that ...